The below vote was unfair.
First and foremost if the song generates feeling then its a DAMN good song. Just because your grandmother died or you had a family member die do NOT vote low on the song that just makes you a bit of a douche. Sorry about your family member but this song is DAMN good and thats no reason to bring the rating lower. This song concept is brilliant. IT generates feeling and in my opinion thats what music is about.
I do however think i can hear places for improvement. There are spots that need some counter melody. its a bit Simple but thats i guess someof the beauty of this. I'd love to get a hold of the FLP to this and show you what I mean. Anyway, beautiful piano. Great concept. Good work on getting top 30 man.
Wyldfyre1