not to bad.
its fun to listen to but i don't feel it tells the story you really want it to till about the end of the song. Great use of the panflute's at the end of this. may wanna turn those instruments down though they start to hurt after a few seconds haha. I feel at about that time the song starts getting into itself and then stops.. You may wanna work on this more add more to it i could see this really taking off!
Wyldfyre1