its not to bad.
Could use a lil more eq work, the instruments are a lil overbearing and loud. The generic FL "Dance" bass drum your using here is kinda over played and makes me almost wanna turn the song off cuz i hear it in almost EVERY new persons track on NG (trust me i did it too so i can understand). All in all this isn't all that bad. Keep up the music.
Wyldfyre1