Hmm =). good stuff
The wind that starts at 22 seconds i can't say i'm too fond of. It has this random way it goes around the song and i feel it could of been put in a bit better, its also a little louder then i would like it to be. All in all though the song starts out pretty nicely with a calm feeling. Nice story for this as well. I'd say it goes with it pretty nicely. At 1:54 the drums come in. I'd say adding them in at that point was a lil late. The drum beat's alright and needs a lil more FX to them in my opinion. However i like the use of strings with this part of the song and the flute comes in and seems to have a method to the madness hah. All in all its a pretty good song i just see room for improvement. Keep it up buddy!
5/5 6/10
Wyldfyre1