Its not bad.
I think the only problem i have with this is that it sounds like you just took a midi changed the sounds and added no melodies of your own. (and if you did that then shaaame shaaaame lol) Though i would say that you did pretty decently with the effects though i'd of used a bit more reverb. The only reason i'm not giving you anything higher then a 5 is its just not original. I'd of loved to hear you add some really really cool melodies with the original beautiful melodies =) Anyway keep on it!
Wyldfyre1