Not too bad.
I think you've got a lil to much reverb on this and that is one of the big problems. Also, i feel that a percussion set on this would really amp up the track. It doesn't really feel like a fight scene completely to me. I would think that some of your instruments were bad choices as well. For a good battle song alot of people expect to hear a booming orchistrated feel rather then some of the synths i'm hearing in this. All in all though, dispite my critique its not a bad song. its got alot of potential and i think with a lil more work it could shine greatly.
Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1