Hmmm Its not bad at all its very ambient and i think that is what you were going for with this right? Has that underwater feel to it like i'm swimming with a blue whale or something. In fact thats really what comes to mind while i'm listening to this. Aquatics. It works nicely for the imagination i must say though other then that i can't say there's to much to it. The song has a very nice ambeince to it for sure. It actually transitions as you listen wich is also nice. I think 5 minutes is a bit long though. For the most part good work. Keep it up.