Hmm.
Its got a pretty original sound. I'm liking the piano but some of the background noises are killing it.. May wanna turn that down some.. I mean its a good song and has great potential here. I think my biggest problem is i'm not a huge fan of industrial. The song IS really beautiful when the piano comes in. I'd have to agree with people saying you need to Remaster this a little. The plucked sounds are alright and have a good breakdown feel to it. Some of the background sounds need to be turned down a little. (All this is of course my opinion). This is a pretty good song and has a LOT of potential i'd like to see you bring it all out. Good work overall!