I like the concept
over all the songs to repetitive and the background vocals are just way to loud. Its not a bad loop but you did post it as a song so as a song it just doesn't really fit the bill. May wanna work on this a little bit more to make it shine. Its got alot of potential
just doesn't work over all for me. Keep on it i'm sure with a little more work this can shine!
Wyldfyre1