Smooth!
probably one of the better tracks i've heard in a while here. Even the lyrics and vocals are rather well done! Great work on this song and i think you've done a great job on this! Keep it up and keep pumping out stuff like this!
Wyldfyre1
Smooth!
probably one of the better tracks i've heard in a while here. Even the lyrics and vocals are rather well done! Great work on this song and i think you've done a great job on this! Keep it up and keep pumping out stuff like this!
Wyldfyre1
I definitely will keep writing. I've actually got sooo many songs just waiting to be finished. But with college, it's going slow getting them done right now.
Very relaxing!
loving the piano in this. Everything flows rather well together and really its just a sweet song to listen to! So you have done a pretty good job with this track.Hmm now i'm wondering if that piano is a string.. LOL not on my usual comp so i don't have my good speakers.. bahh either way it sounds great! Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
Its a string haha =P
nice
it has a sci fi sound to it that really kind of gives it that beauty. Works wonderfully i can see this almost as a running scene song for a sci fi flick! Great work!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks for reviewing! :)
8 bit madness!
really one of the best 8 bit songs i've heard in a long while. Great work on this i'm rather enjoying the sound of this. Its got that great flow and you did a good job over all.
Wyldfyre1
Thanks, really means a lot to me when people enjoy my art!
its the final countdown!!!!!
LOL it does remind me of that also. My complaint about this song would be that its to midi- sounding big time. Its not badly done just figured the instruments could of been chosen better. Other then that its not a bad track at all. So keep on it and great work..
Wyldfyre1
Yeah. I try to stay away from subkitting my more "guitar driven" tracks because any synth guitar sounds like shit. I would have recorded the guitars live, but I don't have the equipment to get GOOD recordings. Thanks though.
its not bad.
Its actually pretty catchy. Fun to listen to i can see someone adding lyrics to this and it turning into something almost brilliant. Most deffenatly a good job on this! Wonderful work
Wyldfyre1
appreciate the feed wf
ill try n keep em commin for ya
huh.
yeah i get why ya used the repetitive sound in this to add lyrics and what not to not mess with the flow to much. Its not really a bad song its just hard to change up that particuler song.. I do like what you did about 1:17 int o the song. This song has great potential and wouldn't mind hearing the finished version. Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
thanks for the feedback...but...there's one problem...this isn't a preview lol, this pretty much IS the final version (unless I get a ton of feedback / proposals from other reviewers)
Thanks for the review anyhow, helps to hear what people like and don't like in my music.
not a bad song at all.
I'm enjoying where you went with this song. I think you've done a pretty good job. The instruments sound rather well and the rythem is very catchy! Great work. It does need to be a lil longer however but it is a loop so i guess that works lol..
Wyldfyre1
Yo thanks a bunch for the review :D i was hopeing for more critisizom but what ever : P i feel as tho it needs somthing but i dont know what....
thanks for the review,.
Its deffenatly a step up.
You're heading in the right direction when it comes to this beat. You may want to change up some of the sounds here and there but you got the beat down right. The guitars work a little better but you may still need to find some better sounds. You ARE heading in the right direction let me tell ya that hah. As for the fella below me let me just say this.. THIS SONG IS original.. You've not stolen this content. Its completely by you that makes it ORIGINAL. IT may not have the best sounds ever but we all start some where. Its easy for some to citique and trust me you'll get alot of that! LOL. Keep on it my friend
Wyldfyre1
Thanks alot wyld... glad you like it :P I need some better sites for plugins though the one I was on only has 10 guitars
I can see this song going far on newgrounds.
Its a really nice tune. Even for improv its got some nicely put together sounds here. Really rocking in a mellow way. You've done a great job with this and it sounds pretty professional as far as the quality goes. A lil more work and i'm sure you'll hit it big! Keep on this sound!
Wyldfyre1
Wow not what i expected thanks alot and stay evil
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