mmm I don't know.
I agree with Gravey on the layering. THe song seems lacking and almost empty for the most part. I'd even say try working with a different type of synth. The opening to this song has a lot of potential. You could even use that to just start anew with this if youeven wanted to or do your own remix. To be honost though bro and i know its your third song its just not really up to par. Just keep up the practice and you'll get your own sound before you know it.
As i've said before it feels pretty empty. Just work on your layering, and background instrumentation for now get yourself familure with putting together a fully automated tune and then youcan worry about other things LOL. Your well on your way.
Wyldfyre1