I see what you were going for.
The concept behind this was pretty cool. The piano works wonderfully but i think you could of done much better with this if you went the more classical feel mixed with strings and pad's and what not. The opening (For lack of better word) synths that were up octave and then down were a bit much i feel. Also a little loud. The end slow fade wasn't bad at all. I do like the concept for sure. SO keep it up! I can't wait to hear more of this.
Wyldfyre1