The piano itself has potential. There are moments that I rather enjoy but then it kind of goes off into some notes that just seem sour to me. This of course could just be me. All in all I think if you added more to this it could shine. The ending seemed natural to the song. So that is a plus as well. All in all I'd say its a decent job but needs a little more work.
Keep it up tho! A little more fine tuning and this song could really stand out!
Wyldfyre1