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Man you already know i'm in love with this song. I always wanted to be apart of making this song but you did something magical to this anyway, I'd love to do some more writing with you when i can for sure. Keep it up buddy!

Wyldfyre1

I like the flute I'm liking the panning effects you have here though some of the other instruments in this (especially at the opening of the song) I just can't get the feel for.

OOOH wait a second. 1:32 Now this is what i'm talking about. This is much better and it just gets crazier and crazier then STOP! The nightmares over but what have you woken up to? I feel that at 2:53 your instruments are clashing slightly thanks to not enough mastering perhaps turn some of the instruments down. For the most part this was a fun listen it did tell a story. I was gonna give it 2 and a half stars but i think its worth at least 3.

Good work and keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

Very nice for the most part. I have to say though that your lead in for this was a little long and i feel would bore some people. For the most part waiting is well worth it. You got a pretty cool sound here. Though I'm not 100 % with the guitar synths. They work for what your using them for however i bet this could TRULY shine if you used some better samples. Keep it up buddy and good work on this.

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Treviabot92-Virstein responds:

It's been way too long since I've seen any comments from you, man. Literally almost four years. Where've you been? lol

Getting back to the comment itself...the synths I used were used mainly because of my own personal preference. They're tried and true, and I have a hard time giving up using something that works, you know what I'm saying? I would hope that the relatively long wait would be worth it, since I don't make my songs and covers to disappoint. In fact, I just heard from a friend of mine only this Monday that my song "Battle of Gram Cave" made his Tron lightcycle game that much more epic. Obviously, that means I did good in making loops.

That same friend also told me that he held off in telling me that so as to not let it go to my head. At the same time, though, I know I'm good, and I know I might even be one of the best in my genre, if not on NG, but at the same time, there's better artists on NG, like Goukisan, DjSc00p, EvilDog, and you. It's gratifying to be told that my music is good, because that tells me that four years means something.

Thanks for the review!

Usually I'm all in when it comes to a song like this. However somethings very off about this particular song. It loops nicely I'll say that much. However its missing so much. My advice would be to turn down your choir slightly so its in the background add some more strings for the foreground perhaps give it a slow beat leading up and then go into something full on with a slightly quicker tempo but keeping your ambient feel. Remember Ambient is supposed to be relaxing. None the less Good work and keep it up.

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xoshaow3 responds:

thank you for your advice. given this is jsut a very short work and no true details are in anything is addable and adjustable :) i have already lowered the choir and i am attempting to make it have a more calm feel first. everything will take its play. again thanks for the criticism. i and my friends who test listen agree that everything sounds better when you have different people give you different ideas to try. thanks!

Reminds me of a chase theme song. Like one car chasing the other guns blasting and life or death kind of scene. Lovely use of instrumentation. Nice mix also. What gets me is you put all this hard work into the song and no one else has reviewed? What has this community turned into? Anyway, I could do without some of the clips in the song. That is just personal preference though. The break down at 2:09 was pretty cool. I'm listening to see what this turns into. Again at this point of the song good use of effects though there's those voice clips i'm not fond of again. I think in this case less is best for something like that. Anyway, This transitioned into something pretty nice to listen to none the less. Good work and keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

Ewwwwwwwww 8 bit. Kidding. I'm usually not a huge fan of 8 bit however I keep reminding myself that's where a lot of my favorite old school game songs started of course. Soo here we go. My review on this 8 bit beauty!

The opening up till 0:11 - Pretty good all in all a good lead in and for the rest of the song

0:11 till 0:32 Pretty cool reminds me of alot of the old games i used to play as a kid. Oooh the NES lol had its share of good games.

The song as a whole is fun to listen to and i think captures the spectrum that is 8bit heh. So all in all great work on this

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Reminds me of something you'd hear in a space video game during a space battle.

Its a pretty good listen for the imagination. Makes me wanna get in a cockpit of a flight simulation and just...CRASH (which is what i would do LOL). Seriously though this song has a lot of imagination behind it. I'm not a fan of the crazy synth that starts at 1:20 or so it actually gets a little annoying but that is just my opinion. All in all its a good listen.

Keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

Loving the church bell at the opening of the song. I think perhaps some choir in the background at that point would bring out the other instruments you have that play along. The song itself seems to work for a horrific moment in someones life. Though the song is wanting a bit.. needs a little more to add that effect. Perhaps a heartbeat drum in the background. Those are my two cents. Good work thus far though.

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coln responds:

I see what you're saying, and I think you're right. Thank you for the comments! I really appreciate them.

Tooth pain is the worst kind of pain bro. Hope all is better now. Anyway, on to the review.

The opening is a pretty good build up. Makes me feel like something awesome is gonna happen. Nice use of choir and i believe strings for that build up. Ah, the song has begun and gives off a silent hill vibe to me. Running from monsters and the unknown. The song is tittled I feel for good reason obviously. Wonderful work on this. The piano added to the song gives a wonderful feel but i feel there could of been more to it. though i guess sometimes less is best eh? Wonderful work and good luck on the competition.

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InvisibleObserver responds:

I think the section post 1:13 drags a little, but I think the song is at a mix point where non-head phone listeners lose a lot of the acoustically effects. I'll probably layer up the main flippy floppy panny reverb on/off synth with something subtle that's centered.

More to what exactly? The piano and its writing? PM me more deets. I think its worst hit by a few quick transitions with it, and needing a little more velocity layer work. Some spots are sexy and others sound to me like I'm playing piano with my ass cheeks (not a good thing).

Glad you liked the intro - I was certainly trying something a little more teasery there.

This is more like it!

How is it that the other songs I've listened to hurt my ears but this one sounds sooo amazingly awesome? Anyway, This is what i'm talking about. Leveling your sounds. Not Everything is as loud as everything else. I must say i don't like the slayer guitar in this however we all have our Slayer phases lol. So for the most part good work on this one and keep it up!

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SanaeKochiya responds:

Thank you, but i didn't use slayer guitars in this song. I used some other guitar synthezer.

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