Its not bad really.
The bass is nice, you got some great melody here. The biggest thing with this song is that you may want to compress that bass slightly because its on the verge of causing clipping. Especually when the pad comes in at 49 seconds. When the song quiets down its still a bit loud. You do have some nice ambience in the background with those strings. THis song could go a long long way with just a lil more EQ work =). Just keep it up buddy!
Wyldfyre1