Hmm.
I say this alot and it really has to do with this being a final fantasy remix.. people look for alot of good things from songs like this and its really hard to meet the expectations of those people. THis song doesn't really meet those expectations at least to me. In fact it kind of ruins the song no offence i'm not hating its just not that well done. I can see you've put some effort into it and you get props for that however things arn't flowing and i'm hearing some sour notes. Keep on it i think you could make this shine if you just put a lil more effort into it
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