not bad.
You have a damn good concept here with the syncing of synths and such. However I think it may be just a little to loud (and i beleive thats what Helth was talking about) The piano that comes in later in the song adds a great feeling to it. Over all i just think this song needs a lil more EQ work to it. Other then that its not bad at all!
Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1