Congrats.
Congrats on the top five. This has some interesting qualities to it for sure. I got to say though you could of made this pop a bit more then it did. Though as the song does progress it gets better and better so thats a damn good thing as well. Lovely wrok here and again, top five, congrats!
Keep writing that music.
Wyldfyre1
lol this song is almost a year old in fact, I just came back and redid a few things...oh well. But thanks for the review!
Very good stuff here.
The string intro was damn wonderful. I like the melodies used in this song. Great use of strings, and a orchistral drum kit. Love the flutes added in. Over all you've done a damn good job in this track. In fact i'm going to fav this.
THIS is ten worthy for sure.
Wyldfyre1
Thanks man!
Not bad at all.
Song does tell a story and thats damn good. I can see a timid girl walking around in a field of flowers. In my opinion the name goes with the song perfectly. Great work all together my friend. Keep it up.
Wyldfyre1
Very interesting.
Its nice to listen to all ya'll spitting to this is just pure sexy. I expect nothing less but greatness from ya'll and thats what i got. Good work fella's all of ya..Even you Yun with this sexy music here. Lovely,lovely stuff.
Wyldfyre1
I heart you jew. <3
interesting for sure.
Enjoying the use of synths and such in this for sure. Interesting lead in to a even more interesting melody. Its got a groove for sure but i think its missing something. I can't really put my finger on it for sure.. It almost feels like it could use a little more melody if that makes sense? anyway this is a pretty nice song none the less i'd expect no less from ya. Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
yup, melody makes sense, but that'd ruin the flow as I already tried adding a melo ;)
Thx for reviewing!
its really not all that bad.
Its not bad at all. Love some of the instruments you used in this. I'm impressed how ya got the slayer in this to sound so decent. The beats a little repetitive but thats not even a issue with this song. Great work with the synths and such. A lil more work on this and it could be a hit.
Wyldfyre1
oh wow.
The flows not bad. Dubbing over yourself works well. Problem i can hear in this is the mic Quality man. I can hear when that puppy kicks on. LOL. None the less its not bad at all. Very hip hop tastic.
Wyldfyre1
Ya, I know what you mean. I'm currently trying to find the right adapters to allow me to run my mic through my brothers mixer first and then into the laptop. Should work better.
The song gives off the feeling of the title.
Its got a great feel to it. At the same time it does say "hey dude, fuck off" lol. Great guitar work in this. Love the hard drums. I gotta say though i'm not sure the opening really worked (the vocal file) Other then that man its a damn good song.. 9 worthy indeed.
Wyldfyre1
Cool dude, but I love quotes haha
unfinished. Still great potential.
I got to say i can't wait to hear what the finished product is going to sound like. VERY interesting thus far. Love the intro, love through out the song. Great guitar work, Wonderful lead ups. Good work over all thus far. Tell me when its finished fella's.
Wyldfyre1
Will do!
Interesting to listen to.
Its got a really cool sound to it for sure. It does get a bit repetitive. The beat itself needs a few change ups. Though you did a great job with (what i'm hearing is a harp and piano mix?) Anyway, you've got a great concept here for sure!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks. I think the whole concept here has inspired me to do lots more stuff like the last 60 secs of it.( i hope u lisened to the whole thing) The last 60 seconds are an mix of House and Orchestra (violins choir harps violas etc.) Anyways im glad u enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
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