its not bad.
just needs more. I'd add a 2nd piano to counter that melody and i'd add a better simple bass line to kinda go with the song. I'd say add a simple string bass.
Wyldfyre1
its not bad.
just needs more. I'd add a 2nd piano to counter that melody and i'd add a better simple bass line to kinda go with the song. I'd say add a simple string bass.
Wyldfyre1
Ya, bass lines in this song have been driving me nuts lol
impressive.
Very lovely sound. Great use of piano melody with the beat. Love the strings in the background. It tells a story for sure. For that you get a 9. Wonderful work on this!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks! Positive feedback is always cool, Appreciate it :)
Yo.
I'm gonna give this a 2 because i'm a big douche and this isn't music.. its SOUND! yeah thats right its SOUND! So you get a 2. Sound in a melodical fashion isn't music its just sound.. Prove me wrong! yeah i thought so! I know everything because i gave you a 2. I'm 13 and i know everything. LOl.. Ok i'm done with that..
Its got some cool instruments in it for sure.That lead synth needs be turned down ever so slightly. Other then that its a hot track!
Wyldfyre1
I'm going to give it a 2 and then cry to my mommy that nobody understands me!
St. PATTYS DAY!!
This captures the greatness of the day for sure. Damn, its to bad i'm working or i'd totally be drinking tonight.. Instead i gotta watch people be drunk. F YOU IRONY!
Anyway man godo work!
Wyldfyre1
Well man who says you can't have a round on me?
Well listen to some Flogging Molly and maybe you will get lucky and Molly with Flog you back xD
Happy St. Patties day me boy
perfect!
I can't stop laughing man. This is freaking pure magic. I can't think of one single bad thing to say about this.. you win!
Wyldfyre1
Very impressive.
Great work on this. Loving the vocals, the piano use. Everything is just nice to listen to. The vocals need to be turned down slightly however. Other then that damn good work.
Wyldfyre1
Thanks for the review, wyldfyre. We'll have a good listen soon and see if we can mix the vocals in better. Thanks again!
lovely.
Enjoying the use of piano and pan flute in this. Love the melody in general. You've improved upon your earlier sound on this for sure. Its fun to listen to and gives off that mystic sexy feel i do enjoy to listen to. Good work man
Wyldfyre1
thank Wyld! really means alot to me you sexy music man guy man dude!
thanks for all the really helpful feed back over the years on my music
as i said before.
This is a lovely song for sure. Its got a lot of great aspects adding into one great listen. There are subtle changes that are easy to hear for sure. Over all a great track. Keep on writing my friend.
Wyldfyre1
has that feel of
Dancing in the jugle (the beat) gives off that great feel. The pads used gives it a kind of psychodelic vibe. If anything its good haha just pretty short (as the song is supposed to be thanks to Bjra's strange strange mind -i heart you Bjra ya bastard-) Anyway, great work!
Wyldfyre1
haha thanks man, yeah I'm glad it gives you that jungle vibe. i think it needs to be longer too but rules are rules. Really, just an excuse for me not making a finished track :P
cool stuff.
I think you could of used some different types of instruments for some of the parts but over all it does go well for what it is. Love the beat for sure. Its fun to listen to. Now i will dog cherry all over you!
Wyldfyre1
rofl, dog cherry ftw
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