Not to bad at all.
I don't find it all that dark. Was expecting something a little slower and evil sounding. However this could be freaky if used correctly in a flash or movie. It does kinda give me a funny mood meaning I try to hold back a chuckle cuz the song reminds me of clowns and just silly things. That is a good thing however because it does half way what it was intended to do. GOod work!
Wyldfyre1
Only good animators can utilize this properly. Also, i don't like slow songs. Meh. The reason i called it DARK carnival, is because it has an "Oh shit im about to be eaten by a mutated wiener dog" feel to it.
LMFAO
yeah, its pretty funny! Thats all i really have to say.
Wyldfyre1
mhm.
Not bad at all!
Im impressed for sure. Yeah, the recording quality needs work however like you said your no pro so its all good. IT goes well with the song! Did you write the song? Did you get it from another artist here? I'd like to know. Anyway, great work!
Wyldfyre1
there all my lyrics, copy righted and all --- im a local artist in my city, yet, no one noes of me accept the streets.
but.. i gotta get in the real studio get this shit mastered my mic, is the size of my pinky...
haha so thats wats up ther. thanks alot for the review i really appriaiate it
very impressed.
I think you've done a pretty darn good job with this track. Still say it needs vocals =) (Maybe i'll add some someday if thats ok haha) I'm gonna go ahead and add this to my fav's. Great work on this song for sure! Lovely to listen to.
Wyldfyre1
Yeah, thanks wyldfyre! I'm very glad you like it.^^
Don't listen to Jonk
I don't think he understands that alot of the music here isn't TRADITIONAL type that you hear EVERYWHERE else. Anyway, this song has some nice rythems i think you could of added a bit more to the intro. IT felt almost like it was lacking. As the song transitions on however it does make up for it. Gets rather lovely. Don't let anyone discourage you! Keep making music!
Wyldfyre1
Damn sexy.
Love the lyrics, love the vocals, love the song. As always man you blow my mind! I'll just keep this short cuz i got to go to work.
Much luv!
Wyldfyre1
crazyness.
Deffenatly something that has a nutty sound. not bad but nothing really great either. None the less. Good work on what you got thus far.
Much luv and keep up the work!
Wyldfyre1
AAAAA
Oh wow...
Hey, I'm jesse valintines biggest fan! interesting remix.. you said you'd post it and here it is LOL. Good singing man you got some vocals on ya for sure!
Wyldfyre1
Ya man, I totally outshined you.
it sounds like you just made it up..out yo ass.
LOL its not really good at all. I swear that if i kick a cat i'd get a better sound coming out. Work on your flow, your voice, EVERYTHING. Your not hard man LOL Take it from me I'm not hard either.
Wyldfyre1
I'm a huge nerd that enjoys being a little silly when the time comes for it. I'm the host and founder of "nerd is the new sexy Entertainment" and try to keep things interesting for the listeners and viewers!
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