Pretty nice.
The opening was good but up till you added the crash and such it was a little bland. I hear room for improvement indeed but at the same time i'm happy with what i'm hearing. Then it goes kinda dancey and thats good also. All in all its alright. I think that what Kazmo was talking about is that you were using the triplets in a higher octave and it gave it a slight off sound. I could be wrong though. Anyway it sounded ok to me. The song was good however it didn't just jump out at me and say Boo! LOL. All in all though it was a good listen. So good work and congrats on getting #1 of the week.
Wyldfyre1