As usual i'm reviewing as i listen.
The opening is alright. It has that slow start build up feel as most songs in this gendre have. I can't say i like the bass line with the percussion that may just be my personal preference though. I'm likeing some of the sound effects you use in the song as it transitions. I can't say i'm huge fan of this due to the random sounds added with the melody. I can't say i've heard the original but I must say that i'm a strong believer of music having feeling or at least drawing something out of you. I feel almost robotic (one way of putting it) when i listen to this.
Now don't take this the wrong way, thats not a super bad thing its just not something i feel i can get into =) Some others (as you can see below) really like this song so perhaps with me its just a matter of preference.
Much luv and keep it up!
Wyldfyre1