not much to it.
however i think it would work pretty well for flash animations. its to bad its so short. However it is a loop so. I will say this though it gets annoying after it loops a few times. It just needs something.. Meh, either way great work!
Wyldfyre1
its like an 8 bit porno song!
LOL its to bad its unfinished it could of been pretty darn good! really, over all i'd say you did good! Just to bad its short and unfinished. KEep on it!
Wyldfyre1
Nice!
Deffenatly could of been made into something like a fight song if done a little differently however i do get a "life or death" situation feel out of this. The melody is pretty bad ass and fun to listen to. Good choice of instruments. Love the crashes you used to kinda liven things up. I'd say this is worthy of a 9 *LOL* Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
love it.
This is what i'm talking about when i listen to your stuff. IT stands out and just blows your mind. Great stuff. It could be used in a story. Or hell it could tell its own story. Wonderful use of instruments. Wonderful..well...EVERYTHING! hahah good work and keep on it my friend!
Wyldfyre1
Woot! got a 9 from you! xD thx alot.
So I think I've got your thingy there, you like story-themed pieces!
its actually kinda happy!
I can't say i really really like it lol but i can't say i hate it either. its not really anything that stands out to me. However thats not a bad thing either. LoL so its hard to decide how exactly i want to review this. You're a DAMN good artist here on newgrounds so i have really really high expectations of ya! Not saying this doesn't cut it. its just not uh...one of your best? heheh. Over all decent work on the track! Write some more music already! hehe
Wyldfyre1
I dunno, I actually like how it sounds, kinda undefined (yes, thats what it is!) and yet its, I dunno, has some clownish thingy to it. BAH still can't decide what it sounds like exactly xD
hmm starts out slow but
it gets pretty good as it goes along. Very nice to listen to. I'd say turn down some of the instruments some. It does get a lil repetitive but i don't think thats something to hold agenst this track because it doesn't stay that way for long. Its still a pretty cool track and very fun to listen to btw here's your 8 LOL. Much luv!
Wyldfyre1
noooOoooOoooOooo
Very nice!
Love the intro melody. The bass comes in and just gives it more back bone as you listen. Then you slowly bring in the main melody. Its like a great leadup.then stops and them bam in yo face heheh. Good stuff really enjoying the sound of this.I was gonna tell ya to do something to make the song better and then the song started doing exactly what i was gonna tell you LOL. Great work!
Much luv
Wyldfyre1
Haha! thanks, I'm glad I've answered your expectations xD
you've deffenatly earned a 10.
This song gets alot of respect because it tells its own story. I told you when you finished this song that i fell in love with it now everyone else can fall in love with it to. I'm glad to be of help man if you need me for any other songs or musing you know where to find me! Very emotional song like i told you in msn. Love the feel of it.. Love the fading and the counter melodies. Everything works.
Wyldfyre1
does sound like a fight scene song.
Everything kinda works together.. I'd say add some effects on the instruments you used.. Especually the slayer later on in the song. Other then that its pretty cool to listen to. Oh, would help with the quick melody at the first part of the song to use a delay or a reverb of course. other then that wonderful work here.
wyldfyre1
Yeah these sound like great idea's that would really improve the song,
but in this scenario, i as a noob, can't really see how i should produce
these effects etcetera. Do keep in mind that i don't have much more than
4 / 5 hours experience in making breakbeats
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