very nice!
its got alot of great sound to it.. However i'd say you need to work on the instrumentation leveling some. Seems like all of the volumes are at the same level wich takes away from the pro sound. Also its a bit short other then that a great song! Would make for a great opening for a movie or something. Over all great work!
Wyldfyre1
holy hell.
Great work on this track. Some of it does sound a little off key or sour note or so but the guitar really freaking rocks. With a little more work this song would freaking rock completely! The guitar and the drums work well.. However around. 2:43 and 3:08 it seems like you just have to much going on in the song and it kills some of it. Other then that keep on it bro love to hear this really shine.
Wyldfyre1
thanks!!
I zero bomb you! LOL
No, not really. Actually this song is strangly relaxing. One of those songs that just grips your imagination and takes you on a trip that rolls with the waves of the sounds. Wonderful work on this really. Great instrumentation and very nice over all on the flow! Keep on this kinda stuff!
Wyldfyre1
a pretty bad ass intro!
we should work on a middle and end man LOL. Seriously this has a damn great start to it. *snaps fingers* LETS GET ON THIS! hahaha... Or if anything YOU FINISH IT! anyway man, great work as usual. Love this stuff. I can see this going a multitude of ways.
Much luv!
Wyldfyre1
lolk
Deffenatly another epic track.
Great stuff. The guitar really brings out some of the struggle in this song.. Yet another track by you that can tell a story. The instrumentation is great. It seems missing something here and there though i can't say what it is..Other then that man.. Freaking great job!
Much luv!
Wyldfyre1
Every track I make I hope to tell a story with. In my opinion if a song cannot invoke a story, an emotion of any sort then it's a song that has failed to bloom. Some would argue genres like Trance can't and don't invoke stories or imagery, but this is entirely false. I've heard a lot of trance that has inspired a story or two.
In any case, though I do realize there could be more in this song, my computer would have none of it. This is as far as this song can go anyways, I just couldn't afford to wait 5 minutes idly while the damn thing stabilized every 10 minutes.
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
was kind of a dissapointment.
Let me let you in on something here. If you make a remix or remake of a song from a video game. especually one people really like they are going to expect something better if not as good as what the original sounded like. This did not meet standards what so ever. No i'm not dissing you. I am just telling you for future reference. The instruments at the beginning gave it alot of potential then you went into the change and that ruined everything. Keep it up.
Wyldfyre1
love the sound.
The piano really does sound pretty nice though it almost sounds alone. Meaning it needs some counter melody to go with it to make it stand out a bit more. Other then this the song just really stands out pretty nicely. I can see this being a great song when finished! Keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
I was trying to throw more notes on that piano, but somehow i wasn't quite successful to get a better melody.
Thankss
very short buut
its a loop so i suppose its ment to be that way haha. I feel it needs more however what you have here is pretty damn good as is. So for what you have here its pretty good! Might wanna turn down the main melody a bit as it does get a lil loud and annoying as you listen to this more then once. Keep on it though!
Wyldfyre1
Yeah i know the main melody is a little loud, but i did´nt want to turn it down cus its a loop :), but thx for the advice.
-<<CyberPot>>-
not bad.
It flows rather well everything goes nicely together. The instruments used in this are nicely chosen. I can't think of anything to say to critique this song other then the beat is a lil typical "Techno-esque" but i suppose thats not even a bad thing hah. Keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
I appreciate your review wyldfyre
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