hmm.
the leadup took way to long to get into the actual song. I see what you were trying to do with this and its a great concept.. its probably cuz its so short and you only get some of the quick pased part for only so long and its kinda a dissapointment. I'm sure when you work on it more and put it out a bit longer it'll help! Keep it up! This has the potential to be a great track!
Wyldfyre1