not bad.
Great idea for a song however you need to turn down the instruments some. Over all its great just hurts the ears some. The instruments chosen are pretty nice. Especually that pretty bad ass guitar sounding instrument (uh a guitar? hehe) either way keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
Sorry about the volume, I'll work on that next time. About the guitar, I really felt it was the only instrument that sounded go doubling the piano, so since you liked it, I've done a good job. Thanks.
LMFAO!!!!
ok this is damn funny... thats all i can really say! You get some credit for making me laugh fo sho!
Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
Oh, wow.
This song gives off so much emotion its freaking beautiful. It has a few sour notes in it however listening to it further it doesn't matter it just adds to the beauty! KEEP ON STUFF LIKE THIS! SERIOUSLY!
Lovely work
Wyldfyre1
Thanks, I really like writing slower songs, and when i do it well, it makes the emotion so much sweeter.
piano..
The piano really shows great promise in this song.. The bass sound however i think needs work a bit.. The counter melody to the original piano really does sound good and you've done a pretty good job on that. As i listen however i will go with my original word with the bass needs to be changed. its the instrument takes away from some of the beauty of the song. Everything does flow rather nicely however when the song actually gets on track. Drums are nice but i feel they could use a bit more effect added to them. The bell sound you added really makes the song shine. Great work over all and keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
Thank you so much for your feedback! Oh, it's so nice to have someone actually say something to me. And I completely agree. I've been fidgeting with the bass all day and didn't manage to get it quite right. If I go back and redo this song, that's my numero uno priority.
Hmm. interesting
Very interesting sound here. I do like the speed racer feel it has to it. Almost like a very dramatic racing movie sound track yanno? It does get a lil repetitive here and there but then you add the strumming and it does help with that. So it doesn't get boring really. Great work with the song for sure. The dum track does need a lil adding on. A break down or something would help out for sure. Over all you've done a pretty nice job here!
Wyldfyre1
no to bad.
I like the strings or string sounding instruments. The drum track goes rather well with everything and you added some effects to them to give them a psychodelic (spelling) feel to it and i rather enjoy that as well. I think you've done a pretty nice job with this track here and i deffenatly say keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
to your earlier question ^_~
oh, it takes something mind blowing to get a 10 out of me. I'm known i guess for my 8's lol because i give an 8 where most other people would give a 10. good music i'm just picky i suppose.. Now for this song.. The actual melody is damn hard hitting and the more i listen to i the more i think it deserves a 9. Great work. The vocal clips worked well in it as well didn't sound out of place and what not like some of them do here on NG. Great work on this. It does get a tad bit repetitive however thats not a bad thing in this case. Lovely drums, Over all a great track! Keep it up my friend!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks =] YOU WILL GIVE MY NEXT SONG A TEN! GRRRRRRRRRRRR! =D i hope i will manage to pull that ten out of you ^_^
This song.
Just makes me wanna go out and KICK A BABY! Yes, i said kick a baby in the face.. and then scream at it going "RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWK" hahaha. Very fun to listen to. Great work to both o ya! Now its time to do the boy band!
Wyldfyre1
hmm.
Its not really bad man but being honost with you its kinda everywhere. There's no set melody or anything. The bass is a pretty nice touch. I don't even think i hear very many effects done to this with the exception of maybe the drums wich i hear a reverb. Hmm... Over all its ok Keep on it man for sure!
Wyldfyre1
I'll explain this one to you another time hahaha
Trancing it up!
Seems a bit hard to me but i'm not one to judge man its pretty cool to listen to I actually can see a chase scene being done to this between ninja's or something. hehe Sorry this reviews a bit short but over all great work!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks ;-) what does it take to get a 10 from u?
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