Not to bad however.
The sound you have for the background melody really kind of ruins the sound of the song. Everything does seem a bit loud for such a ambiently sweet song. The guitar accustic sounded great. It just needs a little more mastering. Over all great work and keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
hmm not bad however.
you have a good concept here. The instrumentation was a great pick. The way you used it however was kinda the problem in this. Deffenatly add some effects to this. REVERB REVERB REVERB haha. Either way man keep on it and good work thus far.
Wyldfyre1
Pretty nice actually.
Love the opening to this. Has that great leadup sound but not done in the traditional way. More so in a way of your own! The beat is really mind blowing. Melody works with it well. I think i hear a bassey piano? Nope sounds like a pad now. Really over all great work!
Wyldfyre1
DAMNIT! i wasn't there =(
ghahahahaha fuckers!! I wish i was there!
WF1
not bad =)
Though you could of added much more to this =) its very ambient wich is good. IT flows nicely though there could be so much more added to this just to add to the beauty of the actual song. As always keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
I know I could add more to this.. but it didnt seem right...
stairing at a music box.
Ok I guess its my time to check this out eh? I don't think i'll do half as well as the fella's below me however this is what the song makes me think of.
as a music box turns it almost reminds me of my life. constantly moving.. Untill knowing every thing eventually will stop. Just knowing that eventually my world and everything i know will be gone.. Death? Now thats scary. Again it makes you think.. IS there something after life? Or is there just...Death? Its harsh to think about but then again life is harsh. As a child your sheilded from all that most the time but as you grow up (as said below) growing into your own is a heart breaking experiance. As a child you have dreams of becoming something big but the reality hits and you know that your just like every one else in life.
I mean what were your dreams? Magic? All of that is gone in a blink of an eye. You start thinking about females. Females that will most likely break your heart. In time they say your heart heals however scars will always be there. Life is just like that. No, i'm not really bitching i'm just saying what this song generates feeling. Sadness and its good that it does because obviously you posted it for that reason. However Magic does exist in music at least and this song does give off the emotion intended. Wonderful work Sorry i couldn't make this longer *^_~.
Great music as always keep it up Nubz..and i can't wait to do the BOY BAND haha.
WF1
The boy band is going to be awesome ! :D
your vocalist is great man.
Love how everything flows in this. If i had to complain i'd say this..Its a little to loud man (could be my headset however). All in all its good the bell sound could use maybe some reverb? hehe other then that man good stuff. Everything flows pretty well as usual. Keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
nice man. very nice.
everything works out. Love the panning you did with the vocal clips (or was that you? haha) Either way great work on this track. Loving it. Not to loud, not to silent. Everything works. The actual song gives alot of emotion very R&B. Wonderful sound man! Something i'd listen to again!
Wyldfyre1
very nice!
Ok i'm very impressed with this song. Its a great sound to it.. Even the SCRATCHING sounds good. Its got a really happy sound to it. The melody flows everything works great. the piano is freaking awesome! Loving this song..its on my fav's now and great work!
Wyldfyre1
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