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ok.

First of all..Song isn't made by you thats going to effect ALOT Of your score by me that alone just kinda dissapoints me. Good work on the guitar however you do know how to play obviously. Playing and singing at the same time even better. Good work on that i suppose. Do start writing your own music and submitting it here. I'm rootin for ya!

Wyldfyre1

Do i hear slayer?

hmm.. I don't know man. The slayer really throws the song off.. I don't know if this was recreated from a midi (it sure sounds like it). Alot of the actual instruments just don't seem like they fit except for the ones that you kept somewhat the same. over all keep it up. You have a interesting concept here.

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Very nice.

I'm sure the zero bombers love you to man haha. Anyway, I'd like to point out that this track does work with its name. Lovely work on that alone. The music does sound like a dream state.Very nice to listen to for sure. Great work! Good EQ, good instrumentation. I feel a piano (just my style i guess) main melody added in would be nice buuuuut heh it works as is.

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Dreamhard responds:

Thanks alot :) It's good to know that there are actually nice, genuine people like yourself on here, who judge fairly :):):)

I'll muck around with more pianos and see what i get. thanks x

not much to this song.

I have to be completly honost with you man.. This isn't very good. Its one pattern at a realy high volume that almost hurts the ears to listen to. (I'm NOT flaming this i'm explaining what needs be fixed). It needs alot of work. I'm assuming this is one of your first tracks so all i can say is keep working on the music you'll get used to it.

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Power and pain eh?

Power and pain are two very expressive words with alot of meaning behind them so when you write a song with the title it has alot of high expectations. I must say that this song didn't live up to what i was hoping to hear however that does not mean in any way its bad. Instead of power and pain i get a more stoner/running from the cops feel to this song. Its a bit repetitive but thats not bad in this case. The drums and guitar are nice to listen to.

Great work.

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VincentVardia responds:

Thanks i will probably change the name after a while... seems to be a habit of mine until i find something that sits right. I agree fully that the words power and pain are strong and it was to attract people like you (yeh i know sad).

Since i and my team have gotten a new drummer he's been adding well a pleasent touch to the songs. I owe this song actually to our new drummer.

After we have written the Lead's solo properly the song will be properly named and resubmitted until then i'm glad something in this song was pleasent to listen to.

Thanks for the review and check out some other songs in my collection you might add the little details i need.

I see alot of potential!

its got a really nice melody (wich i could see as a even better background melody) If you added a different main melody to this perhaps a twinkly piano or even another synth this would shine greatly. Over all pretty nicely done. Keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

Heavy strings and bass

The strings and bass work together pretty nicely. I like the way you've melded the melodies in this. Can't say to much more being that this isn't finished. So keep it up!

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jkrox4eva responds:

thanks wyldfyre! you always give good reviews =]

.... EVERYONE, STRIVE TO BE LIKE WF1!

hmm..

Well it IS original. That i can give you credit on. However It does need work. Some EQ work, and some effects added for sure. Maybe a bit more melody added as well would help. Anyway good work thus far.

Wyldfyre1

not bad at all.

Now if i could only get my mix working like i want it to haha.. Keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

hmm.

I do feel you could of done a bit better on this however its not all that bad. I can't say its really better then the original wich i feel is a bit better then this actually. Some of the instruments could use some work in EQ and even some more effects. Not bad though for a remake.

None the less keep on it!

Wyldfyre1

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