about below.
I think the person below me is trying to tell you that its a bit loud an dstrong for a funeral Hymn. I can see it being one if it wasn't so beat.. LOL see what i see to this is a bunch of zombie's break dancing (almost like a stranger type of thriller video) or raving to this song. Its hard to say this song could relate to a hymn. I see where were going with it especually with the beginning piano. However it went a whole other direction for sure. That does NOT make it bad.. just not what you were saying.
Either way, keep it up!
Wyldfyre1