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about below.

I think the person below me is trying to tell you that its a bit loud an dstrong for a funeral Hymn. I can see it being one if it wasn't so beat.. LOL see what i see to this is a bunch of zombie's break dancing (almost like a stranger type of thriller video) or raving to this song. Its hard to say this song could relate to a hymn. I see where were going with it especually with the beginning piano. However it went a whole other direction for sure. That does NOT make it bad.. just not what you were saying.

Either way, keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

SessileNomad responds:

thanks for the review

i tried me best, guess is still didnt make it through

thanks though

not bad at all.

May want to work on the mastering of this song for sure. You have things turned up to the point where your getting clipping. Deffenatly look into that and it'll help your quality. It has a really cool type sound to it. Reminds me alot of Chrono trigger. either way you NEED to keep it up on this.

wyldfyre1

Rarg!! LOL

To be honost man i'm sooo tired of seeing this song remixed. Its not that you've done a bad job on this song. Its just that it seems like everyone and their mother wants to remix this song on NG. hahah.. Seriously i'll give you a 5/7 for this though. Over all interesting. A bit short but interesting haha..

Much luv!

Wyldfyre1

ok.

First of all..Song isn't made by you thats going to effect ALOT Of your score by me that alone just kinda dissapoints me. Good work on the guitar however you do know how to play obviously. Playing and singing at the same time even better. Good work on that i suppose. Do start writing your own music and submitting it here. I'm rootin for ya!

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Do i hear slayer?

hmm.. I don't know man. The slayer really throws the song off.. I don't know if this was recreated from a midi (it sure sounds like it). Alot of the actual instruments just don't seem like they fit except for the ones that you kept somewhat the same. over all keep it up. You have a interesting concept here.

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Very nice.

I'm sure the zero bombers love you to man haha. Anyway, I'd like to point out that this track does work with its name. Lovely work on that alone. The music does sound like a dream state.Very nice to listen to for sure. Great work! Good EQ, good instrumentation. I feel a piano (just my style i guess) main melody added in would be nice buuuuut heh it works as is.

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Dreamhard responds:

Thanks alot :) It's good to know that there are actually nice, genuine people like yourself on here, who judge fairly :):):)

I'll muck around with more pianos and see what i get. thanks x

not much to this song.

I have to be completly honost with you man.. This isn't very good. Its one pattern at a realy high volume that almost hurts the ears to listen to. (I'm NOT flaming this i'm explaining what needs be fixed). It needs alot of work. I'm assuming this is one of your first tracks so all i can say is keep working on the music you'll get used to it.

Wyldfyre1

Power and pain eh?

Power and pain are two very expressive words with alot of meaning behind them so when you write a song with the title it has alot of high expectations. I must say that this song didn't live up to what i was hoping to hear however that does not mean in any way its bad. Instead of power and pain i get a more stoner/running from the cops feel to this song. Its a bit repetitive but thats not bad in this case. The drums and guitar are nice to listen to.

Great work.

Wyldfyre1

VincentVardia responds:

Thanks i will probably change the name after a while... seems to be a habit of mine until i find something that sits right. I agree fully that the words power and pain are strong and it was to attract people like you (yeh i know sad).

Since i and my team have gotten a new drummer he's been adding well a pleasent touch to the songs. I owe this song actually to our new drummer.

After we have written the Lead's solo properly the song will be properly named and resubmitted until then i'm glad something in this song was pleasent to listen to.

Thanks for the review and check out some other songs in my collection you might add the little details i need.

I see alot of potential!

its got a really nice melody (wich i could see as a even better background melody) If you added a different main melody to this perhaps a twinkly piano or even another synth this would shine greatly. Over all pretty nicely done. Keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

I'm a huge nerd that enjoys being a little silly when the time comes for it. I'm the host and founder of "nerd is the new sexy Entertainment" and try to keep things interesting for the listeners and viewers!

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