All i'm seeing here thus far is
music thats not yours. this is a great way to piss alot of people off and get banned from NG. Keep it up and i'm sure something bad will happen to your account.
WF1
All i'm seeing here thus far is
music thats not yours. this is a great way to piss alot of people off and get banned from NG. Keep it up and i'm sure something bad will happen to your account.
WF1
a sad spiral.
what this song reminds me of.
I sit here in the dark... Alone. I've lost everything. My job, my wife. Everything i touch turns to shit. I just got kicked out of the local bar. I sit here on the side of the street wondering where i went wrong. Where did I go wrong? Did i do something to deserve this emptyness? That i'm not sure. All i can say is that i've hit rock bottom.
There ya go. A story that this gives me in my minds eye.
Much luv!
Wyldfyre1
That was my intention when I wrote the song. Darkness. Loneliness.
its not bad.
I think its just missing something all together. I can't say what off the top of my head (and trust me i've listened to this for a bit before i figured out what felt strange to me about this) Its got a pretty happy sound but at the same time it reminds me of a sigh of releif. hmm.. Not bad what so ever keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
Maybe i know what you're missing. A stronger bassline?
I just listened this again and i realized that i should add a stronger bassline.
Thanks for the review!
MH16
beautiful!
Very well put together. Now this song tells MANY stories. it gives true emotion with it. All that time it took you to master this was much worth it. Great work on this track not only am i giving it a 10 but i'm adding it to my fav's. Wonderful work!
My hats off to you my friend.
Wyldfyre1
Thank you so much !
Deffenatly can tell.
Can tell you rushed it however for a redo of the song i'd say you did an alright job. Sounds to me that you may of added a few of your own personal touches to this so that helps if so. The only reason this is getting a lower score (well 2 reasons) is that its not an original track and two it needs a bit more EQ work. Other then that its not bad at all. Keep on the music!
Much luv!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks man. I usually don't use EQs actually, so I'll test one out next song and see what it sounds like. And I wanted to make clear that it wasn't an original track. I have plenty of those already uploaded. Oh well, I just got tired of it after a little while, so I just wanted it done.
Lovely.
Its a very earrie yet relaxing track. Strange almost feels like something you'd hear in a church in some parts. really a great track. Great place to get the insperation by the way. Keep pumpin out the songs.
Wyldfyre1
hmm.... You know what? It works.
Its got a very complex yet simple feel to it. Its easy to enjoy i'd say. the flute with the effects really does help. The other instruments and sounds in the background work rather nicely together. This has one of those Spaced out on drugs feels to it or even a peace of the soul for a monk.. None the less great work!
and stop drinking that weed tea! ^_~.
Wyldfyre1
Thanks for the positive feedback. It's always fun to hear what other people hear in the songs I make like this. It's never the same from person to person.
Feelings into music.
You got to love it when you can actualy write non stop and put your feelings right to music. I've had those moments and i love it. This is a great sounding track here. Love the piano (and as most people already know i luv my piano!) Keep on it for sure man. The beat works pretty well.. I'd say add more strings if anything but it works so well as is.
Much Luv!
Wyldfyre1
This should get you laid! LMFAO
Seriously though, a great relaxing track. I'd of changed a few things up (like progression up) but this screams one of your styles so it works man! Deffenatly has that " I heart you " feel to it! up till about ouch, the hard strings you added at 124 a lil to hard man.. Kinda ruins the relaxed feeling of the song. It calms back down a bit later on during the song however i think that the relaxed feel is where you wanted to stay for this. However it works for your style.
Keep it up
Wyldfyre1
Very good stuff.
Sounds almost like it could be an anime theme or something lol. Seriously though its a great song vocals are good, the vocal quality is actually good. Lyrics are great. I have no real complaints about this song. Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
I'm a huge nerd that enjoys being a little silly when the time comes for it. I'm the host and founder of "nerd is the new sexy Entertainment" and try to keep things interesting for the listeners and viewers!
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