That was pretty damn funny!
I think even though you had some lame humor in there (Lame but STILL funny) it was damn good. The animation kicked butt. The voice acting was pretty well done. The music was good (though i'd like to see people use more audio from the audio portal. All you have to do is search a bit and you'll find some gold here on NG). Over all you did a pretty damn good job!
Wyldfyre1