not bad.
the piano at 159 is damn well done. The song in general sounds almost like it has a inner meaning. However at the same time tells a story of a coming storm! Even for the slight flaws this may have (and those are very few) I'd say you've done a VERY good job on this. Keep it up as always!
Wyldfyre1
Hey thanks, nice review!
well done!
sounds pretty cool. The bassey sound you chose for this worked perfectly! Everything sounds great.
Wyldfyre1
Ah, thank you! You're comments are appearing regularly. :D
NICE!
the sound for this is just amazing. Great work with this.. You really should write lyrics for this puppy!
Wyldfyre1
Lyrics would be very nice.
I can't help but hope.
I'm glad you liked it man!
not to bad!
Love the piano but i think ya should add a lil more to it the strings however are freaking awesome! Good sound there for being bored and doing this i'd say you did a great job! if you need any VST's or drum sounds tell me!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks for the review man! Good to hear from you!
I'll be sure to let you know if I acquire your help!
TYSM! =3
3.08 / 5.00 (+ 0.38)
I think i know what your missing.. Its depth.. There is a good rythem but i think you need to counter one melody with another.. giving it a little bit more depth and adding some more substance (spelling?) to the song. Over all its a great work and deffenatly don't give up on it!
Wyldfyre1
Sounds good, I'll put some more work into it, and re-release it in the next while. All the help I get helps me make better tunes, and I thank you for that. Peace out!
Love the idea behind this!
The beats pretty bad ass and the bells.. Damn the bells are hot in this. Great sound over all. Wonderful sound. Who knows if time is on any of our side hah the fact is we just do what we do and enjoy life as time goes by some random advise hah. Anyway, wonderful song the bass is great everything flows! Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
thanks bro, im thinking of finishing this one in the future.
huh.. interesting.
I like the change up in the speakers with the robotic vocals. The song itself however does need work. it has this strange trippy sound that i don't know just yet if i'm digging. It gets a little repetitive and starts bothering the ears after a while. However the first minute or so is fun. Keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
Appreciate the feedback. :) I do wish to make my stuff less repetitive in FL, and someday maybe I'll get out of the demo so I can save things and devote more than a couple hours to them. :/ As for the trippiness, I kinda just started shooting for that. Somehow seemed fitting with the robots shouting college algebra terms. Or maybe I was trying to make it sound even scarier to my study partner. Iunno. O__o It just kinda.... happened. O_o I should put more conscious thought into my stuff maybe.
hmm..
I think you can keep working on it however what i'm hearing here does need alot of work. Its almost like your trying to mix bass's and its not working to well.. The Synth you use at 48 seconds works however. don't give up on it just change it up some!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks, this is the first kind of song I have ever made and can't thank ya enough on the feedback. I'll see what I can do, expect to see another try put up in the next week or so. Peace!
woo hoo!
Deffenatly a fight song if i ever heard one! would be great for any flash animation be it movie or game. Wonderful work on this! Very rocking!
Wyldfyre1
Yeah, fight song! Ha! Thanks ^_^ Don't go beating your parents now!
May not be my total thing but...
I'd say not bad. The guitar and drums alone freaking rock.. However the vocals.. I don't really get lol to rough for me! none the less you get credit because over all this is a pretty kick ass song!
Wyldfyre1
Why thank you.
I'm a huge nerd that enjoys being a little silly when the time comes for it. I'm the host and founder of "nerd is the new sexy Entertainment" and try to keep things interesting for the listeners and viewers!
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