Synths are great for dance songs lol.
Its not bad really and if done correctly i think you could make a pretty cool dance remix or version to this. This right here though screams to me something like "we're in a bad sitiuation and need help" you know kinda like a scene in a movie would do great for this song. its pretty catchy none the less. Keep it up!
For a dance song you may wanna change up the beat, work on some of the effects and maybe add in some moogs or smooth synth strings. You'll get it i know ya will!
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