is this the one?
IF so its beautiful. a very great song and i'm expecting something like this to go far here on newgrounds. Great work. I'm enjoying everything about this song. You chose the perfect instruments and everything flows wonderfully. Great work
Wyldfyre1
Wow thank you very much for your rare 9/10 I wasn't expecting that at all, I'd really like to thank 100% for that man, Thanks alot ;)
not bad.
it does work and i see this in a few different scenes in a movie or game. I'd see it as a game over screen, or a death of a friend, or even a hero fighting even though he's bleeding to death. Its got alot of potential. Keep on this type of sound!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks for the review. Cheers!
needs work.
First of all the slayer guitar (if thats what you used) needs alot of work.. it just kills the song and makes it a big ear sore.. some of the other sounds are alright. I'm sure you had to of known that the guitar was way to loud in this when you posted it. It just needs work. Keep it up though!
Wyldfyre1
Slayer sux :/ No slayers here, no...
Anyhow, like i said in the description, i was only bored as hell and made this out a midi, nothing really worked on...
Very awesome!
Very worthy of my 9. When a song starts out and the melody gets me then i know its gonna be a freaking winner just like this one did. Great work on that. I'm enjoying the whole song and how you did this. The Name even gets my attention! Great work on this track and i hope to hear much more from ya!
Wyldfyre1
Thank you very much for your great response ! I don't know what to say :b
Just thank you.
I like the concept
over all the songs to repetitive and the background vocals are just way to loud. Its not a bad loop but you did post it as a song so as a song it just doesn't really fit the bill. May wanna work on this a little bit more to make it shine. Its got alot of potential
just doesn't work over all for me. Keep on it i'm sure with a little more work this can shine!
Wyldfyre1
urmm, i posted this real quick this is a short song i made for 2 mins nothing serious..... the vocals seem fine but only to much repeative.
hmm.
The opening is a bit loud and repetitive so that will most likely throw some listeners off. As it goes on at 22 seconds that area is just kinda annoying and hurts my ears. Its just kinda a randomly put together song. Its not bad mind you its just not my style i guess or just overall needs work.. Keep on it though!
Wyldfyre1
pretty funky!
just need a little work is all. Over all though this is a pretty sweet sounding track! You got your point across with it so thats good!
Wyldfyer1
haha great stuff!
Just another one of those tracks that you hear and can't help but smile to. Makes ya wanna go out and just dance it up! Wonderful job on this track! Giving you one of my very rare 9 scores hah. Loving this track!
Wyldfyre1
Very nice!
Great work i had no idea that FL studio could sound like this guitar wise. I'll have to check it out more and see what i can do guitar wise.. This is some pretty nice stuff right here!
Wyldfyre1
Very nice
has almost a spooky sadness sound to it.. Over all its a beautiful track. You chose great instruments for this and everything just flows
Great work
Wyldfyre1
Thanks again. Glad you liked this one too.
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