not bad but not great.
its not really anything special.. I like some of the aspects of the song that you fixed up but others just kinda ruin it.. The slowing down at the beginning wasn't really something that i felt needed to be done and the song sounds WAY to midi-esque (i'm sure it was ment to sound that way) Other then that this track isn't half bad. May need a lil work but really it shines in its own way! So keep on it and bust some ghosts!
Wyldfyre1