Hmm.. pretty nice.
I like what you got here, but i could see a WHOLE lot more going into these melodies giving it more depth and creativity. Not saying its not creative one bit. In Fact they do sound great. However, i could see you going much further with this just adding a few more melodies in the background to bring out the original sound. Anyway, great work with this song and good work getting front page! Much luv!
Wyldfyre1