hmm..
I don't know about this one really. I see what your doing and how your going but some of the instruments were kinda annoying to the ear to me rather then really wowing me. however the beat is nice and it does help out! Its not a bad song mind you I just think that this one didn't come out as well as you could have had it! Maybe a lil more work and BAM it'll shine heh either way man its still a cool song for what it is!
Wyldfyer1