Ok....
1: Your voice acting just sucked... I couldn't hear crap unless i turned the speakers up way to loud even then it didn't sound like you tried (maybe you didn't?)
2: The graphics? Crappy. I mean yeah its yet anoooother mario brother's sprite flash but come on!? You could at least try!? Your concepts are great some of the humor would be great if the animation was actually well...animated and not horrid cut and paste.
I mean i could go on..but i'm not going to.. I mean you made it you should be able to see the difference between this and like...ANY OTHER sprite movie.
You have alto of potential when it comes to humor.. Please make something good!