wyldfyre1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A piece of Heaven]

Not to bad.

I like the strumming patterns you got going on here. the beat i feel though could use a bit more to it. The piano seems kinda off key or out of place. Its got a lot of potential and i feel with some work it could shine greatly. Keep it up.

Wyldfyre1

[Carry Me Away Please]

This has massive potential.

You have a really awesome opening here that could turn into something pretty nicely done if you just use a lil imagination and emotion in this. perhaps add a pan flute for the next part.. or even use this as a leadup to a high synthed burst after this to a traditional trancey beat. =) All in all i'm sure what you do with it will be a good listen.

Wyldfyre1

thatguy669606 responds:

Thanks for the good suggestions. I like the idea of a pan flute a lot! Strangely enough, before I submitted this like I did I had it lead up to a trancy beat, but I felt that it drew away from the ambiance. However, the lead up to a high synth would be really cool. I'll try playing with both suggestions here and hopefully it'll turn out good.
Thanks again!

[Oceans of Despair (robomix)]

oh the ambience!

very fun to listen to. I feel the clap is a bit much though. Some of the space sounds also seem to be a bit over the top. However everything else loops and works rather well for what it is. Keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

thatguy669606 responds:

Well thank you for the kind words sir! I gotta say most of the composition was him. This was just something he wrote that I thought could have been a little better with a bassline and some different drums and he was gracious enough to let me change his original. I usually don't write songs like this. Perhaps I should try.

[3 Minutes to closing]

Some goods, some bads.

the good.

Your beat: is pretty rock worthy and gives the song a good back bone to stand agenst.
The rythem: isn't bad at all and has that fight scene feel to it.

Ok, the bad.

Slayer: yah, just...slayer. Find yourself some better guitar vst's from the audio forums trust me that will help big time. Slayer isn't super bad but people get tired of hearing it in music really quick hah.

Lack of instruments: This song would be so much better if it wasn't just guitar, slight bass instrument, and drums. You could make it shine a bit more if you got a lil more imaginitive with it.

All in all thats all i have to say. So keep it up and if you need help finding some vst's and or soundfonts gimme a holla!

Wyldfyre1

Mattyoes responds:

WOW!...
You're good at advice...
I understand the fact that slayer gets incresingly old and I know that lack of instruments is one of my major problems...
When I try to get more instruments into it I can't put the right ones in and get some hideous frankenstien worthy crap that doesn't sound right...
I do need help finding some guitar vst's so PM me with a website or something...
Thanks for all the help
-M64

[~Slow Rain~]

Interesting.

I think the biggest problem with this is some of the choice of instruments you used. I think givin the right instrumental work on this that this song would shine rather brightly, however some of what you have working on this kind of hurts. Your highs are slightly too high. Its a good concept for sure just needs a slight bit of work. Its still a decent listen =) So keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

[Hop44]

LOL i don't know what to think.

I don't know what to think of this one.. I picture a trouble maker of some sort just playing pranks on people haha it gives off a imagine wich is good but still hmm.. LOL i just wish there was moer to it. Thouuugh the good thing is that it loops great!

Wyldfyre1

Cyberdevil responds:

Let your image run wild, like fire. :P Thanks for the review!

[Hop45]

look at you!

Doin your loop thing again! =). I can't say that this is one of your best bro but its a good fight / running a way scene loop i think. I just think you could of put a lil more into this. All in all though its good for what it is! Keep it up buddy!

Wyldfyre1

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah, not the greatest, but it's a loop, hehe. Will do, thanks for the review!

[Idea #2]

not too bad =).

The piano i think is what is most of a turn off for me. I don't think you have enough verb, or even a slight delay would give it a bit more of a better sound in my opinion. Though the song itself as a idea works well. I just think there are some parts that you can work on to make it shine. Like, change up the beat a bit more. Perhaps even use some different synths here and there other then the ones your using. All in all its not a bad song =). So keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

[Shogun Braker!!!!]

niiiice!

I think you sent me a listen to this one a while ago when you were first working on it. Trippy indeed. a fun listen so all is well with this track. Keep it up buddy!

Wyldfyre1

Druids-Warcry responds:

thanks, i tryed

[[RM] - Creepy Night WIP]

Halloweeny.

Works well for what you were going for andi think thats how it got top five. Congrats and great work on this song!

Wyldfyre1

Randomizor responds:

Thanks. =P