its got a smooth sound to it.
there's just not much to it.. You may wanna try adding some more background sounds to bring out what you have. Maybe some strings?
its got a smooth sound to it.
there's just not much to it.. You may wanna try adding some more background sounds to bring out what you have. Maybe some strings?
kk, thank you for you comment! =)
Alllright Another SBB Submission!
haven't got to comment on any of your stuff for a while (maybe because i've been doing alot of my own stuff lately hah)
lets see...
I don't know if i'd call this a sad song however i can see the concept behind that. Its a really touching beat. It does reach out and sounds freaking awesome. Good use of piano really. Everything does flow rather nicely.
You don't give it a chance to be too repetitive. Yup Nice work Sir SBB! good stuff here. Keep on keeping on my friend.
its to Midi-ish
I think the midi fake sound kills alot of it. Good idea to remake the song bad idea to use what instruments you used.
Ohhh yeah!
its like a love song.. Your right though it DOES need lyrics. Its a nice track. Relaxing, soothing, has a heartbeat all its own. very nice song!
Nice metal track
It sounds pretty good.. You can actually get away with what some TRY to.
still damn tight
you still got it homie! Keep on keeping on! Love it. Put some lyrics to this and you got it made!
Still a tight beat
hell yah!
huh
Ok lol don't think i'm a hater man but i'm gonna tell you some things you should improve on this song.. The song concept is great.
First off you should change the opening.. its to slow and really doesn't have any feel to it.. Just sort of to us listeners seems like (Yah its leading up to something...ok...ok..thats it?) Give it a better lead up.. The guitar concept was a great idea just go with that and add some more sounds.. the screaming comes in rather well. Add more of that here and there. try different types of screams.. Howling? stuff like that..
its not a bad track just needs improvement
Listen to it go!
Its rockin out.. GOOD STUFF
it started out pretty good
the rock guitar later kind of just ruined what effect the opening part of the song had. Its not a bad song. Just needs a lil tweaking and work.
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