hmm.
yeah, you'll need to umph this up a little. There just doesn't seem to be any real melody that catches the ear.. Its not bad mind you! I'm in no way hating. Its just a track that needs a little work. Some parts just kind of get boring and you want to turn it off.. You don't want your songs to be like that..Either way Keep on it i'm rootin for ya!
Wyldfyre1