Very enjoyable.
I'd say do something with the bass sound (for lack of a better word for the instrument) it kinda takes away from the beauty of the song, and this IS a very beautiful song! A LOT of potential here. Other then that i can't seem to think of any other flaw with this song it makes you just want to move to it. Great work!
Wyldfyre1
Thx, I knew something was up with the Horror Bass. That wah wah thing right? PM me if Im right. Cheers!
not bad.
it deffenatly needs a little work though. It just feels like its missing something. Its not a bad funk though its got some groove to it it just sounds unfinished.. Anyway keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
Okay, well thanks... Btw if you figure out what's missing please PM me...
yup!
Has that racing car sound to it. LETS RACE! LOL. Great work on this track. It gets a little to repetitive in some parts but other then that its actually very nice to listen to! Great work on this
Wyldfyre1
its not finished yet so ill change it up alittle bit to fix the repetitiveness thank you for the review as always ill do the same in return
interesting.
IT has that type of build up that makes me enjoy listening to it. Everything flows its not the typical type of techno or trance that i'm used to. You've done a great job with this track i'm most deffenatly going to add this to my fav's! Great work.
Wyldfyre1
Thank you for the constructive review!
Plus a bonus for the favorite! :D
GREAT!
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!This is just to damn funny! Your not gay and damnit this proves it! Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
A very simple song.
Simple yet very moving! Lovely stuff. Some of the best music to date is based on a simple rythem of some sort! Great work with this it does tell the story and then some!
Wyldfyre1
Thank you very much =) I know.. I wanted to make something simple but touching.. Im kinda bored of making complex songs with SUPERULTRAMEGAFAST-Melodies.. Thank you again for the review :) I apreciate it.
hm.
Well as everyone else said you did over do it with the bass it kinda killed the song. I do see what your trying to do with the tune. It just didn't seem to work. I think you could of done alot better with this. Its like you didn't spend to much time on it.. Thats ok though i mean all our songs can't be magic right? Just keep on it!
Much luv!
Wyldfyre1
great stuff!
I've never been good at making a song for the hip hop fans out there hehe you however, obviously have it down! thisis a pretty damn tight track!Great work!
Wyldfyre1
beautiful!
you've always had a remarkable gift for music and this song right here shows it! yet again you have impressed me with some smooth flowing tracks! Great work!
Wyldfyre1
Great stuff!
Very ambient yet rockish and that i think is a great mixture of sounds that can just turn into a winner of a song.. Great work on this and you probably should do a few more like this i bet this type of sound could go far! Nice stuff all together!
Wyldfyre1
Thank you very much, Being an FL studio fan boy i love to play with all sorts of electronic stuff and then rock it out with guitars. Just about all my new music is a mix of electronics and guitars.
I'm a huge nerd that enjoys being a little silly when the time comes for it. I'm the host and founder of "nerd is the new sexy Entertainment" and try to keep things interesting for the listeners and viewers!
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