I understand what you were going for.
there are some problems here. It has that ok rock sound but you really want it to sound bad ass you will have to fix up the drums a little bit (better drum kits). you'll deffenatly need to find a better VST or any type of sound to replace tbe slayer wich just sounds horridly generic. I love the concept of this song! I could see it going far if ya just went the extra mile!
Over all not bad but could be better!
Wyldfyre1