Not bad at all.
For the mac however i don't think it would of worked all to well. Its got more of a scary feeling to it then a sad feeling (i'm sure thats what mac08 was right? the emotional-sad- songs?) its not bad at all however. I DO enjoy how you've added the "ahh's" in and such. At about 1:43 i think you could of substituted the (for lack of better word) basey sound for something else.. Its not a bad digital instrument to use i don't know, just doesn't sound like it would fit for this.. Either way as the song goes on it does blend in so maybe i'm wrong ^_~ Either way as i've said before man keep on it. I'll be listening to more of your stuff in the future i'm sure of it! Much luv and keep it up! Oh, and congrats on the top 5.
Wyldfyre1