Its been a while!!!! I actually got excited seeing this! It has the funk i'm used to from you! its got a cool little groove to it.. I guess this will be a short review haha I'm half asleep much luv brutha! Keep on it!
it's been too long!! nice hearing from you WF1
I hear room for improvement. I think your crashes should be a little louder and more umph to your bass drums however that could just be my own personal preference. I do like your piano. I think that a second melody in with the first piano in the early part of the song wold help also. For the most part its a good listen and pretty fun.
Keep up the music!
Holy cow, color me impressed. I was almost going into this expecting a half cracked chip tune song however you put some amazing work into this. I have absolutely no complaints about this song. I don't find it as a perfect song but i still think you did an amazing job on it. Something that has me tapping my feet for sure! I could see a 8 bit character headbanging to this hah. Great work.
wow thanks!! Thank you for the awesome review!
What stands out mostly to me in this is the bass! Everything else sounds pretty darn good also and goes pretty well for like a generic space hero theme lol. I'd say you got what you wanted with this. I bet with a little more work you could make a epic sounding song out of this. Either way it works for what you want it. Keep it up
haha got my five =) Lovely work with the 80's vibe. I think some claps would increase the whole 80's feeling though. All in all you got your self a good song here. I bet you could add to this and make it even more magical.
Thanks for the review :D
I did have a few claps in there but they were buried under the snare
Absolutely beautiful. When I write or listen to any orchestrated music i feel it should bring out some sort of emotion and i think you hit the nail on the head here. Feels to me almost as if a love scene on a movie or a death scene. Wonderful use of strings and piano. Though i feel you could of used a little more piano in this to bring out that beauty slightly. Also, Maybe some timpani drums would add to the epic-ness of this song. Finally the abrupt ending kind of threw me off some but other then that this song is rather amazing. I will be adding it to my list of favorites. Good work
I have to keep things simple, because if I add too much stuff my computer can't handle it, and Kontakt starts dropping samples when exporting. I'd love to make huge epic orchestral songs, but my computer just can't handle it. Ah, and the ending was abrupt to portray death, in a way.
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece!
Its a little repetitive, but catchy! I think maybe dropping the beat at one point and adding a solo for that beautiful piano you have going on would be a pretty nice addition to this. The song itself though reminds me of a cool chase scene from a video game or movie. So I do think you came across with what you were going for (If that is what you were going for hehe). Keep up the good work!
Thank ya wyldfyre1! It was what I was going for, something chase-y and intense hehe ;)
The opening is a pretty good lead up. However I must say that I keep expecting it to drop into something much more and even though the song itself is a wonderful experience i bet you could improve upon it with some well placed strings (would even be a wonderful attempt to lengthen it out some). As for a name? I would say something like "Computation" or something like that hah. All in all this is a good song just feels incomplete in my opinion. Keep up the good work none the less
First of all, thanks for reviewing my songs.
Well, these projects are just demos, I'm just trying to let people know what I am working on in order to see what they say to improve the final version. Of course EQ, compression and synths are going to improve, I'll try to make you give me at least a 4 star review when I finish them! :P
Thanks again for your consideration and for giving such a in-depth analysis.
I absolutely love songs like this because of all of the emotions that can be taken from it. IF anything i would say you could of made this a bit longer. A drum track would of added so much more to this too. Really makes it feel as if its missing something. Still, I would say you got an A for the over all work on this. Keep up the good music!
Thank you ! It was my intention to create a song that focuses only on the melody and emotions, which is why I decided against drums and other synths, but I am of course thinking of expanding on this, but probably as a new song. Again, thank you very much !
I actually really have a STUPID complaint for this song. The name.. I'm sure you could of thought of something much better then "=D". That is what i thought of before i listened to it then i realized... YUP! THIS SONG IS SUPER HAPPY. Hah so I retract my earlier stupid complaint. This song has a pretty cool space vibe to it as you listen to it. "Sooo happy in space" is what comes to mind while listening to this. Anyway, I would say some of the leveling could be done a little differently but that is a very small complaint. Other then that you did a pretty darn good job on this!
Your complaint isn't stupid. It's actually the title that is. XD
Thanks very much for this.
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